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Old 05-20-2018, 11:56 AM   #121
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Re: She

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First line is she hypnotize me with her moves or mood maybe. I was gonna take a crack and gave up, it's impossible haha. Chorus is definitely close. Thanks!

I love Buddy's part on this.


Stab at the chorus:

There ain't no God or man could kill the burning fire
she is born in the middle of my soul
if you wait too long to taste the juju is gone
the lights are off, you have run out of time
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    Re: She

    Is this in 9/8 with the chorus being in 4/4? Trying to tap out the verse and it sounds like 7 or 9 but i want to say 9/8
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    Old 05-20-2018, 12:11 PM   #123
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    Is this in 9/8 with the chorus being in 4/4? Trying to tap out the verse and it sounds like 7 or 9 but i want to say 9/8


    I figured it out - 2 bars of 5/4 and 2 bars of 4/4 repeating for the verse

    you can also think of it as one bar of 10/8 and one bar of 8/8

    you can also think of it as two bars of 4, one bar of 2, and then another two bars of 4 repeating

    chorus is all in 4/4
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    Old 05-20-2018, 12:15 PM   #124
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    This song has restored my faith in the overall album.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 12:20 PM   #125
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    So I believe the verse is in 9/4 with the chorus in 4/4. Gives me a 7 feel!
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    I figured it out - 2 bars of 5/4 and 2 bars of 4/4 repeating for the verse

    you can also think of it as one bar of 10/8 and one bar of 8/8

    you can also think of it as two bars of 4, one bar of 2, and then another two bars of 4 repeating

    chorus is all in 4/4
    I wish I could understand time signatures
    Been playing guitar for 15+ years. Still have no clue
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    Old 05-20-2018, 12:29 PM   #126
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    I wish I could understand time signatures

    Been playing guitar for 15+ years. Still have no clue


    Top is the number of beats in one measure
    Bottom is the division of those beats (ex: 4 means the beats are in quarter notes, 8 means theyíre in 8th notes, etc)

    So 4/4 means there are 4 quarter notes in a measure

    5/4 means there are 5 quarter notes in a measure

    6/8 means there are 6 eighth notes in a measure

    etc etc
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    Old 05-20-2018, 12:51 PM   #127
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    Re: She

    She, Again and Again, SC, Idea of you, Here on out and Do You Remember are all going to be extremely enjoyable for me for a long time.

    Album still hinges on That Girl is You, Come On Come On and When Im Weary being more She then Come Tomorrow
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    Old 05-20-2018, 01:03 PM   #128
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    Re: She

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    I have the new songs, including "She", in mp3 form on my dropbox for anyone interested:

    https://www.dropbox.com/sh/s970hgrw0...0kx6o773a?dl=0
    Are they taper quality or they ripped from the youtube vids? I didn't know there was a tape out of last nights show.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 01:13 PM   #129
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    Re: She

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    Top is the number of beats in one measure
    Bottom is the division of those beats (ex: 4 means the beats are in quarter notes, 8 means they’re in 8th notes, etc)

    So 4/4 means there are 4 quarter notes in a measure

    5/4 means there are 5 quarter notes in a measure

    6/8 means there are 6 eighth notes in a measure

    etc etc
    So what does that make the She verse?

    I count it

    1 2 3 4
    2 2 3 4
    3 2 3 4
    4 2 3 4
    5 4

    It’s essentially 4 measures of 4/4 and then the last measure being a half measure. What is 4.5/4?
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    Old 05-20-2018, 01:16 PM   #130
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    So what does that make the She verse?

    I count it

    1 2 3 4
    2 2 3 4
    3 2 3 4
    4 2 3 4
    5 4

    Itís essentially 4 measures of 4/4 with the last measure being a half measure. What is 4.5/4?


    I would personally count either

    1 2 3 4 5
    1 2 3 4 5
    1 2 3 4
    1 2 3 4

    or

    1 2 3 4
    1 2 3 4
    1 2
    1 2 3 4
    1 2 3 4

    for ease

    if youíre going your way, youíd have to make it 9/8 or 9/4 and go

    1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9
    1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9

    which works, but it doesnít really follow the music
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    Old 05-20-2018, 01:16 PM   #131
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    Re: She

    Here's my stab. Couldn't get a few lines because Dave doesn't enunciate super well all the time:

    She hypnotize me with her moves
    She ????
    She might say she don't but then she do
    She before I wake up with the thing??

    I know that
    Ain't no god or man could kill the burning fire
    She is bored in the middle of my soul
    If you wait too long to taste, the juju's gone
    The lights are on, you have run out of time

    She ????
    She's the poison that will save you
    She collects the laughter and the tears too
    She burns down the ??

    Ain't no god or man could burn the burning fire
    She is bored in the middle of my soul
    If you wait too long to taste, the juju's gone
    The lights are on, you have run out of time

    She makes me feel like I'm (holding on to?) her
    She a smile I can not (bring no one to?) her
    She will leave a man so ???
    She still hypnotize me with her grooves

    She know that
    Ain't no god or man could kill the burning fire
    She is bored in the middle of my soul
    If you wait too long to taste, the juju's gone
    The lights are on, you have run out of time




    I really think it's "bored in the middle of my soul" as in "they bored into the shale to extract natural gas"

    Hopefully some of those verse lines will be more clear next time Dave sings it!
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    Old 05-20-2018, 01:17 PM   #132
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    Re: She

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    I would personally count either

    1 2 3 4 5
    1 2 3 4 5
    1 2 3 4
    1 2 3 4

    or

    1 2 3 4
    1 2 3 4
    1 2
    1 2 3 4
    1 2 3 4

    for ease

    if you’re going your way, you’d have to make it 9/8 or 9/4 and go

    1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9
    1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9

    which works, but it doesn’t really follow the music
    The count I’m giving aligns with Carter’s drum rhythm and Dave’s vocal pause while he waits for an extra two beats to cycle back. Sounds like 9/4 would be correct.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 01:19 PM   #133
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    The count Iím giving aligns with Carterís Drums rhythm. Sounds like 9/4 would be correct.


    Oh ok, that works

    I was aligning mine to hit a new measure at the start of each note / chord progression / vocal line
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    Old 05-20-2018, 01:40 PM   #134
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    Re: She

    Sounds like something off of Everyday but one of the good songs of Everyday.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 02:27 PM   #135
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    Love this song.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 02:40 PM   #136
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    Re: She

    These the lyrics?

    She
    She screams in silence
    A sulley roit penetrating through her mind
    Waiting for a sign to smash the silence with the brick of self control
    Are you locked up in a world that's been planned out for you?
    Are you feeling like a social tool without a use?
    Scream at me until my ears bleed
    I'm taking heed just for you
    She
    She's figured out
    All her doubts were someone else's point of view
    Waking up this time to smash the silence with the brick of self control
    Are you locked up in a world that's been planned out for you?
    Are you feeling like a social tool without a use?
    Scream at me until my ears bleed
    I'm taking heed just for you
    Are you locked up in a world that's been planned out for you?
    Are you feeling like a social tool without a use?
    Scream at me until my ears bleed
    I'm taking heed just for you


    Had to be done

    I'm digging what I'm reading about the song though.. Still trying to hold strong on not listening to it

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    Old 05-20-2018, 02:44 PM   #137
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    Re: She

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    Are they taper quality or they ripped from the youtube vids? I didn't know there was a tape out of last nights show.
    Ripped youtube.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 02:50 PM   #138
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    Is this in 9/8 with the chorus being in 4/4? Trying to tap out the verse and it sounds like 7 or 9 but i want to say 9/8
    Ya, it's 9/8.

    Or a bar of 5/4 and a bar of 4/4.


    Chorus is 4/4.

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    Old 05-20-2018, 02:57 PM   #139
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    Ya, it's 9/8.

    Or a bar of 5/4 and a bar of 4/4.


    Chorus is 4/4.
    or 9/4 I meant.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 03:03 PM   #140
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    These the lyrics?

    She
    She screams in silence
    A sulley roit penetrating through her mind
    Waiting for a sign to smash the silence with the brick of self control
    Are you locked up in a world that's been planned out for you?
    Are you feeling like a social tool without a use?
    Scream at me until my ears bleed
    I'm taking heed just for you
    She
    She's figured out
    All her doubts were someone else's point of view
    Waking up this time to smash the silence with the brick of self control
    Are you locked up in a world that's been planned out for you?
    Are you feeling like a social tool without a use?
    Scream at me until my ears bleed
    I'm taking heed just for you
    Are you locked up in a world that's been planned out for you?
    Are you feeling like a social tool without a use?
    Scream at me until my ears bleed
    I'm taking heed just for you


    Had to be done

    I'm digging what I'm reading about the song though.. Still trying to hold strong on not listening to it
    Had to be done................

    It was, about 3 pages prior.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 03:56 PM   #141
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    Anyone know who has the writing credits on this song? I assume it isn’t Batson.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 04:21 PM   #142
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    Verse in an odd time signature coupled with a catchy powerful chorus and an outro, which allows for a lot of interpretations is a formula that works great for Rapunzel and I'm glad they decided to go that way with She. Also, I think it's just a matter of time before they develop the outro to 5+ minutes.
    Now that I think about it, I wouldn't have minded a third chorus in Rapunzel.

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    Old 05-20-2018, 05:22 PM   #143
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    This track has Cavallo written all over it IMO
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    Old 05-20-2018, 06:51 PM   #144
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    Here's my stab. Couldn't get a few lines because Dave doesn't enunciate super well all the time:

    She hypnotize me with her moves
    She ????
    She might say she don't but then she do
    She before I wake up with nothing

    I know there
    Ain't no god or man could kill the burning fire
    She is bored in the middle of my soul
    If you wait too long to taste, the juju is gone
    The lights are off, you have run out of time

    She ????
    She the poison that will save you
    She collects the laughter and the tears too
    She burns down the ??

    Ain't no god or man could burn the burning fire
    She is bored in the middle of my soul
    If you wait too long to taste, the juju is gone
    The lights are off, you have run out of time

    She makes me feel like I'm going under
    She a spell I cannot break no wonder
    She will leave a man so ???
    She still hypnotize me with her grooves

    She know there
    Ain't no god or man could kill the burning fire
    She is bored in the middle of my soul
    If you wait too long to taste, the juju is gone
    The lights are off, you have run out of time




    I really think it's "bored in the middle of my soul" as in "they bored into the shale to extract natural gas"

    Hopefully some of those verse lines will be more clear next time Dave sings it!
    I agree about "bored" as in bored a hole. I've bolded a few things I heard differently.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 06:59 PM   #145
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    The horns during the chorus and general sound of the chorus reminds me of the outro of When The World Ends. Was Glen Ballard part of the "orgy"? Haha

    I like She. Much better than Come Tomorrow.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 07:19 PM   #146
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    She, she came from the land of the cotton ...
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    Old 05-20-2018, 07:56 PM   #147
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    This song is like if soundgarden had sex with pearl jam (which kind of happened anyway in real life) only to be impregnated by gov't mule, i mean the piano jam over that riff is so mule it hurts, combined with a touch of everyday album essence.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 08:05 PM   #148
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    This song is like if soundgarden had sex with pearl jam (which kind of happened anyway in real life) only to be impregnated by gov't mule, i mean the piano jam over that riff is so mule it hurts, combined with a touch of everyday album essence.
    It's big Pimpin'. Really happy Dave has really found a strong voice on electric guitar!
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    Old 05-20-2018, 09:42 PM   #149
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    I like what Tim does during the chorus.
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    Old 05-20-2018, 09:53 PM   #150
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    Anyone know who has the writing credits on this song? I assume it isnít Batson.
    Supposedly Dave and Alagia
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