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Originally Posted by jaymas9
I don't get the lazy lyrics sentiment from this album at all. Some of the greatest songs ever have lyrics this board would consider lazy. Just look at Hello, Goodbye by the Beatles or D'yer Maker by Zeppelin. Is someone really going to try and say those aren't incredible tunes? There has been posts in the past criticizing Squirm's lyrics for being mediocre at best or lazy. I'm not singling you out Evans, I am just looking for some sort of insight into this lyric criticizing phenomenon that goes on there a whole lot. It just seems like a contradiction people would crap on Shake Me even for lyrics yet praise classic bands who have songs just as simplistic and light-hearted.
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Let me try to break this down so I can maybe show you what i mean.
Shake Me: The lyrics are dripping with sex and that's not a bad thing. The problem is, Dave used to be able to say alot more without saying so much (if you get what I mean). Look at Rapunzel for example. That song is dripping with sex but the imagery is
rich. The wordplay is
creative. But in Shake Me, we get "I like my coffee with toast and jelly but I'd rather be lickin' you from your back to your belly". We get "thing I, like about you" said like twice in the first part of the song, like he's filling space. It's like he's being blatantly crude to distract us from the creativity that is sorely missing.
Funny: I don't mind the lyrics here. It's a little bit bordering on Alanis and "Ironic", but I like it.
Lying in the Hands of God: to me, this is the highlight of the album. If you have an album full of songs written and produced
like this, then you have a TRUE top 3 contender.
Why I Am: lyrics are OK, nothing too special here. The lyrics are really "on the nose".
Dive In: Perhaps the most embarrassing lyrical part of this album is Dave contemplating about this polar bear. He really wants to make this grand statement about global warming and he's willing to shoehorn lyrics for the opportunity to put it on the album. It's a fun song and I enjoy it, as I enjoy all the songs on this album, but if we're talking lyrics then this is not too hot.
Space Man: "I love the way you _______ baby, and I love the way you _______". And then leading up to the chorus it's just dave kinda scat-humming along. I feel like this song started with the chorus, like one night they came up with the "All the freaks are on parade......" lyric and then sort of half-assed the rest of the song. It just doesn't feel like alot of effort went into this. I also feel like the chorus should be instrumentally more "new-orleans Jazzized", it's just dying for a horn to be playing some of those scales.
Squirm: The lyrics here are good. I think Dave did a good job here.
Alligator Pie: This song is fun, I like it, but it's sort of a mess all around. Sometimes a mess is fun though. Lyrically though, is just okay I guess. Meh.
Seven: Aaaand here goes Dave again really wanting to be down and dirty and write something dripping with sex.....aaaand once again he hits us over the head with crudity rather than coming up with creative ways to say things. I mean c'mon, talking about not washing your hands because you smell the person's crotch on them? Holy hell in a shit house Dave.
Time Bomb: I nearly forgot to include Time Bomb. That says something. "If Martians fell from the sky what would that do to God?" C'mon Dave, too on the nose again. And this "noone would believe it except the fucking nutjobs". That is so awkward. The ending is awesome instrumentally, but the lyrics are a little bit cringeworthy.
Baby Blue: An absolutely beautiful song here. The lyrics are beautiful and you know why? Because it's real, it's heartfelt, it meant something to him personally. Dave's always been at his best that way.
You & Me: Nearly cringeworthy bubble gum pop, but it is very sweet-natured. No real lyrics worth mentioning here.